{"id":8414,"date":"2023-09-12T07:41:50","date_gmt":"2023-09-12T04:41:50","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/?p=8414"},"modified":"2023-09-12T07:42:00","modified_gmt":"2023-09-12T04:42:00","slug":"vezi-miinile-mele-fragment","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/?p=8414","title":{"rendered":"Vezi m\u00eeinile mele <br><small>(fragment)<\/small>"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<div class=\"wp-block-group has-cyan-bluish-gray-background-color has-background\"><div class=\"wp-block-group__inner-container is-layout-constrained wp-block-group-is-layout-constrained\">\n<p>\u201eGabriel Macsim ar fi trebuit s\u0103 fie, azi, la al doilea volum \u0219i s\u0103 se bucure de o recunoa\u0219tere pe m\u0103sur\u0103, dar via\u021ba \u0219i pandemia au decis altfel. P\u0103cat. E un prozator complet, insolit, neiert\u0103tor, curios, surprinz\u0103tor, care intrig\u0103, seduce \u0219i pune probleme. Lumea lui e una privit\u0103 la microscop, p\u00e2n\u0103 la ultima celul\u0103, p\u00e2n\u0103 \u00ee\u0219i pierde umanitatea, doar c\u0103 nu \u0219tim niciodat\u0103 cine e cel care prive\u0219te. Abia la sf\u00e2r\u0219itul c\u0103r\u021bii sim\u021bi c\u0103 e vorba de un extraterestru. Alt\u0103 explica\u021bie nu poate fi.\u201d (Florin Iaru)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u201eStranietatea d\u0103 farmecul povestirilor lui Gabriel Macsim, un prozator cu o preferin\u021b\u0103 evident\u0103 pentru \u00eent\u00e2mpl\u0103ri, situa\u021bii \u0219i cazuri neobi\u0219nuite, la limita paranormalului cu fantezia. Uneori \u00eentunecate, cu implica\u021bii metafizice, parabolele \u0219i scenariile imaginate de Gabriel Macsim au un <em>aftertaste<\/em> prelung \u0219i nelini\u0219titor. Mai ales proza titular\u0103, un <em>Blade Runner<\/em> ortodoxist, distopie religioas\u0103 hi-tech, \u00een care ecumenismul pansexual se refugiaz\u0103, la propriu \u0219i la figurat, \u00eentr-un stil de via\u021b\u0103 primordial, departe de catedralismul virtual, pentru a prezerva umanitatea de <em>combo<\/em>-ul religiei mercantile cu tehnologia hipnotic\u0103.\u201d (Marius Chivu)<\/p>\n<\/div><\/div>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading has-text-align-center\"><strong>Fragment din povestirea <em>Vezi m\u00e2inile mele<\/em><\/strong><\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-drop-cap\">F\u0103r\u0103 excep\u0163ie, chiar \u015fi dup\u0103 treizeci \u015fi trei de ani de la deces, cadavrele s\u00eent aproape intacte. Zeci de mii de tuberculi imen\u015fi confia\u0163i, \u0163epeni de E\u2011uri, \u00ee\u015fi a\u015fteapt\u0103 r\u0103bd\u0103tori sanctificarea \u00een fiecare cimitir, alinia\u0163i \u00een sicrie, la doi metri sub p\u0103m\u00eent. E mo\u015ftenirea unei culturi gastronomice dat\u00eend de la \u00eenceputul secolului \u015fi transmis\u0103 de la o genera\u0163ie la alta. Obiceiuri culinare care au transformat cimitirele \u00een limburi. Depozite \u00een care trupurile s\u00eent puse la p\u0103strare p\u00een\u0103 \u00een ziua deshum\u0103rii. Abia atunci te despar\u0163i definitiv de cei pe care i\u2011ai pierdut. P\u00een\u0103 atunci \u015ftii c\u0103 s\u00eent aici, \u00een siguran\u0163\u0103, \u015fi c\u0103 \u00eei vei mai vedea o dat\u0103, iar asta \u00ee\u0163i d\u0103 sentimentul consolator al unei prezen\u0163e \u00eendep\u0103rtate. S\u00eent \u00eenc\u0103 aici, chiar dac\u0103 t\u0103cu\u0163i \u015fi nev\u0103zu\u0163i, \u015fi o vreme nu trebuie s\u0103 te despar\u0163i de ei de tot. \u00centre deces \u015fi incinerare ai la dispozi\u0163ie o lung\u0103 perioad\u0103 \u00een care s\u0103 te obi\u015fnuie\u015fti cu ideea pierderii.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u00cemp\u0103cat sau nu, ziua aceea va veni. Vei sta l\u00eeng\u0103 morm\u00eent, al\u0103turi de cei trei preo\u0163i androizi din comisie \u015fi, p\u00een\u0103 la deschiderea complet\u0103 a sicriului, \u0163i se va scana codul 3DQR primit la depunerea dosarului. Un sfert de or\u0103 c\u00eet dureaz\u0103 slujba religioas\u0103 ai timp s\u0103\u2011\u0163i iei r\u0103mas\u2011bun. Va fi ultima oar\u0103 c\u00eend \u00eel\/o vei mai vedea. Sicriul va fi apoi transportat c\u0103tre cel mai apropiat crematoriu BOR unde, \u00eentr\u2011unul dintre sanctificomate, partea corpului aleas\u0103 \u00een cerere va fi amputat\u0103, iar restul trupului, incinerat. \u00cen dou\u0103 zile vei primi acas\u0103 urna cu cenu\u015fa, iar \u00een dou\u0103 s\u0103pt\u0103m\u00eeni, rezultatul anchetei, \u00een general pozitiv.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>La fel ar fi trebuit s\u0103 fie \u015fi \u00een cazul meu. Ast\u0103zi ar fi trebuit s\u0103\u2011l v\u0103d pentru prima dat\u0103 pe bunicul \u00een carne \u015fi oase \u015fi, \u00een aceea\u015fi zi, s\u0103\u2011mi iau r\u0103mas\u2011bun de la el. Nu m\u2011ar fi ajutat s\u0103\u2011l cunosc cu adev\u0103rat, s\u0103\u2011i aflu povestea. Chiar \u015fi a\u015fa, nimic din toate astea nu s\u2011a \u00eent\u00eemplat. Imaginea trupului lui smochinit, schimbat la culoare, a\u015fa cum mi l\u2011am \u00eenchipuit \u00een ultimele zile, a fost \u00eenlocuit\u0103 cu cea a c\u00eetorva oase \u00een\u015firate pe materialul c\u00eendva alb al sicriului. Teama ini\u0163ial\u0103 a fost \u00eenlocuit\u0103, mai \u00eent\u00eei de uimire, \u015fi apoi de u\u015furare. Tabloul unor oseminte ascunse sub ni\u015fte zdren\u0163e e mult mai suportabil dec\u00eet cel al unui trup mumificat.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Au urmat dezam\u0103girea \u015fi neputin\u0163a. Bunicul n\u2011avea s\u0103 fie sf\u00eent ca majoritatea celorlal\u0163i de aici. Am \u015ftiut c\u0103 ceva e \u00een neregul\u0103 de c\u00eend am intrat \u00een cimitir \u015fi m\u2011am apropiat de cei aduna\u0163i \u00een jurul morm\u00eentului. M\u2011au privit to\u0163i lung, \u00een t\u0103cere, apoi s\u2011au uitat unul la altul, f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 \u015ftie ce s\u0103 fac\u0103. Unul dintre preo\u0163i s\u2011a \u00eendep\u0103rtat de grup \u015fi a vorbit la brainphone. C\u00eend a terminat, s\u2011a \u00eentors \u015fi mi\u2011a spus c\u0103 nici nu se putea pune problema unei slujbe religioase. Nu \u00eentr\u2011un astfel de caz. Cea f\u0103cut\u0103 \u00een urm\u0103 cu treizeci \u015fi trei de ani era suficient\u0103. Abia atunci am priceput c\u0103 nu putea fi vorba nici m\u0103car de re\u00eenhumarea osemintelor, incinerarea sau p\u0103strarea lor undeva \u00een capela cimitirului. Nici nu au \u00eentors capul c\u00eend am \u00eenceput s\u0103 strig dup\u0103 ei. Au ie\u015fit pe poart\u0103 \u015fi am r\u0103mas doar cu groparul, zecile de cruci aliniate ca o planta\u0163ie \u015fi soarele ap\u0103s\u00eendu\u2011\u015fi greu lumina pe cre\u015ftetele \u015fi umerii no\u015ftri.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Groparul a a\u015fezat oasele \u00eentr\u2011o roab\u0103. L\u2011am urmat \u00een t\u0103cere p\u00een\u0103 la pompa de l\u00eeng\u0103 capel\u0103 \u015fi am privit jetul puternic al furtunului alunec\u00eend peste glazura lor poroas\u0103 \u015fi din ce \u00een ce mai deschis\u0103 la culoare, c\u0103ut\u00eend o solu\u0163ie. Le\u2011a r\u0103sturnat \u015fi le\u2011a \u00eempr\u0103\u015ftiat s\u0103 se usuce pe p\u00eenza de sac \u00eentins\u0103 al\u0103turi, pe iarb\u0103. A intrat \u00een capel\u0103 \u015fi a ie\u015fit cu un s\u0103cule\u0163 negru. \u015ei\u2011a scos \u0163igara electronic\u0103 \u015fi a fumat \u00een lini\u015fte, f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103\u2011\u015fi ia privirea de la p\u00eenza de sac. M\u2011am g\u00eendit c\u0103 am ajuns unul dintre milioanele de locuitori ai ora\u015fului aflat dincolo de gardul de ciment al cimitirului.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Azi trebuia s\u0103 m\u0103 despart pentru totdeauna de bunicul, f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 fi aflat m\u0103car o parte din povestea lui, dar nu am f\u0103cut\u2011o. L\u2011am purtat ore \u00een \u015fir, la pas, pe str\u0103zile Bucure\u015ftiului, privind \u00een jur, f\u0103r\u0103 s\u0103 \u015ftiu ce s\u0103 fac. Acum zace lini\u015ftit \u00eentr\u2011un col\u0163 al camerei, \u00een s\u0103cule\u0163ul lui negru. O gr\u0103m\u0103joar\u0103 de oase de culoarea untului \u00eenvechit, nu mai mare dec\u00eet o pernu\u0163\u0103 decorativ\u0103. Bunicul a fost un b\u0103rbat firav. N\u2011ai cum s\u0103\u2011\u0163i dai seama din poz\u0103, dar a\u015f fi putut b\u0103nui.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>M\u0103 uit \u00eenspre el c\u00eend \u015fi c\u00eend, \u00een timp ce v\u0103 scriu. Dou\u0103 carpiene ale ar\u0103t\u0103torului lui drept stau \u00een bagaje, pe un strat de aerogel, \u00een cutiu\u0163a metalic\u0103 primit\u0103 de la Iacob. Mi\u2011a spus c\u0103 sigur vor veni s\u0103 ia r\u0103m\u0103\u015fi\u0163ele. Cei trei preo\u0163i au comis o gre\u015feal\u0103 pentru care, mai mult ca sigur, vor fi tra\u015fi la r\u0103spundere. Zvonurile lansate \u00een leg\u0103tur\u0103 cu ce s\u2011a \u00eent\u00eemplat azi s\u00eent ultimul lucru dorit de biseric\u0103 \u015fi autorit\u0103\u0163i, a\u015fa c\u0103 orice dovad\u0103 trebuie eliminat\u0103, f\u0103r\u0103 a provoca \u00eens\u0103 un scandal diplomatic.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<h5 class=\"wp-block-heading has-text-align-center has-cyan-bluish-gray-background-color has-background\"><a href=\"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/?p=8410\">Citi\u021bi un scurt interviu cu autorul la rubrica <em>Cum?<\/em> din revista noastr\u0103.<\/a><\/h5>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\u201eGabriel Macsim ar fi trebuit s\u0103 fie, azi, la al doilea volum \u0219i s\u0103 se bucure de o recunoa\u0219tere pe m\u0103sur\u0103, dar via\u021ba \u0219i pandemia au decis altfel. P\u0103cat. E un prozator complet, insolit, neiert\u0103tor, curios, surprinz\u0103tor, care intrig\u0103, seduce \u0219i pune probleme. Lumea lui e una privit\u0103 la microscop, p\u00e2n\u0103 la ultima celul\u0103, p\u00e2n\u0103 \u00ee\u0219i pierde umanitatea, doar c\u0103 nu \u0219tim niciodat\u0103 cine e cel care prive\u0219te. Abia la sf\u00e2r\u0219itul c\u0103r\u021bii sim\u021bi c\u0103 e vorba de un extraterestru. Alt\u0103 explica\u021bie nu poate fi.\u201d (Florin Iaru) \u201eStranietatea d\u0103 farmecul povestirilor lui Gabriel Macsim, un prozator cu o preferin\u021b\u0103 evident\u0103 pentru<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":274,"featured_media":8415,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[29],"tags":[210,1831,128,98,1832],"coauthors":[1833],"class_list":["post-8414","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-fictiune","tag-ego-proza","tag-gabriel-macsim","tag-polirom","tag-proza-scurta","tag-vezi-miinile-mele"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/wp-content\/uploads\/2023\/09\/Vezi-miinile-mele_Ego-Proza-a.jpg","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/8414","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/274"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=8414"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/8414\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":8419,"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/8414\/revisions\/8419"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/media\/8415"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=8414"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=8414"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=8414"},{"taxonomy":"author","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/revistafamilia.ro\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcoauthors&post=8414"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}